SushiMaker
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Witam,
szukamy osób które chciałyby pomóc nam przy opracowniu wersji angielskiej BW.
Jeżeli ktoś z was chciałby spróbować swoich sił niech zamieści w tym temacie tłumaczenie następującego questu:
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| Miłość, pożądanie, fascynacja, sama nie wiesz co to było. Jednego jesteś pewna, gdy zobaczyłaś Go uciekającego przed stadem mutantów wiedziałaś, że zaryzykowałbyś wszystko, nawet swoje nie-życie by Go ocalić. Sprawiłaś, że krew szybciej zakrążyła w Twoich żyłach, mięśnie nabrzmiały, a ścięgna zrobiły się bardziej elastyczne - Skoczyłaś - Głowa przywódcy sfory oderwała się od ciała z dziwną lekkością, słodko-lepki zapach krwi wypełnił Twe nozdrza chęcią zabijania. Walczyliście szybko i skutecznie, ramię przy ramieniu, wampir i... wilkołak. W kilka chwil było już po wszystkim. Smak tej nocy na wiele kolejnych lat wyrył Ci się w pamięci. Dziwna mistyczna poświata okolicznych głazów oraz światło rzucane przez księżyc w pełni nadały nadprzyrodzony urok chwili, która dla was przeciągnęła się w wieczność. Następnego wieczoru obudziłaś się z dziwnym uczuciem czułaś w Sobie nowe życie. Przez kolejne sześć dni Twój towarzysz przynosił Ci upolowane zwierzęta byś mogła pożywić się ich krwią. Z każdym dniem to co niemożliwe stawało się coraz bardziej widoczne - nosiłaś w sobie nowe życie. Siódmego dnia nastąpił poród, nic co dotąd przeżyłaś nie sprawiło Ci takiego bólu.. i nie napełniło taką radością. Azel - bo tak miał na imię twój towarzysz podał Ci niewielkie zawiniątko. Zobaczyłaś w nim wilcze dziecko Twoje dziecko, z dwoma wampirzymi kłami. Zrozumiałaś wtedy iż nie dane Ci będzie widzieć jak Twoje dziecko dorasta. - Zabierz je do swoich - powiedziałaś a oczy bezwzględnego łowcy wypełniły się krwawymi łzami. Następnego wieczoru obudziłaś się już sama z krótkim liścikiem przyciśniętym prezentem . Wiele lat później dowiedziałeś się iż daleko na północy wilkołak naznaczony przeznaczeniem zjednoczył okoliczne klany i razem stworzyli enklawę dla tych wszystkich, którzy nie chcieli żyć w Mieście. Dziwne są wyroki przeznaczenia. Zdobyłaś .....IMIE MĘSKIE |
zależy nam by tekst był na poziomie native speakera.
Pozdrawiam i dziękuję.
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Sushi- Ot cwaniak, jakkolwiek to zabrzmi. Mistrz wykrętów, obracania kota ogonem, i udowadniania czegoś, co nie ma racji bytu ni też logicznego uzasadnienia. Potrafi się kłócić że białe jest czarne i vice versa. |
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Sushi - to Tusk który się wypowiada jak trzeba tylko i wyłącznie |
UWAGA! Zanim wyślesz wiadomość prywatną, przeczytaj kto jest kim i co komu zgłaszać.
Zaoszczędzisz w ten sposób mnóstwo czasu!
Wyłączona możliwość otrzymywania prywatnych wiadomości - proszę pisać do MasterOfPuppets 
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phyrexii
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Data rejestracji: 16-08-2006
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Pisane po pijaku jutro zerkne i zedytuje wieksze bledy.
Takze poszperam po slownikach bo musialem omijac kilka kluczowych elementow.
Love, desire, fascynation, you don't know what it was. You are sure about one thing, when you saw him running away from many mutants you know it, you coul risk even your non-life to help him. You made that your blood was running faster in your veins, your muscles grow bigger, your legs become more flexible -You jumped- Head of mutant leader left his body very easy, bitter-sticky scent of blood was every where. You was ready to kill everyone. You fight hand to hand vampire and .. warewolf. In short time everything has ended. Youremeber smell of that night for ages. Strange mistic aura of stones and light deflected from moon that gave this act anormous look, that moment took ages for you and him. Next night you woke up with strange feeling you fell it in your sellf it was new life. In next 6 days your companion brought you fresh hunted animals that you could feed yourself with their blood. Every day you fell it those thing that was impossible for you before now became more clearly - you had it in yourself, new life. Day seven. New life was born. Nothing that you experienced before gave you so much pain ... and never gave you so much happines. Azel - that was the name of your new companion he gave you small baby. You saw in him wolf baby your baby with two vampires teeth. You know that you won't be able to see how your soon will grow up.-Take him with you- when u say this your eyes was crying with blood. Next evening you woke up alone with short letter. Many years later someone told you that far in north warewolfs united other clans and together made enclave for all that don't wanted to live in the city. Destiny is blind. You gain.... Boy Name.
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nedian
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Może tak?
Love, desire, facination, You aren't sure what it really was. But one thing was sure: when You saw Him running away, chased by a horde of mutants, You knew that You could risk even Your non-life to save him. Your will made Your blood flowing faster, muscles become much stronger, tendons - much flexible - You jumped - Head of the horde leader was separeted from the body easier then You could expect, sweet-dense scent of fresh blood filled Your nostrils with lust of killing. You were fighting swiftly and effectively, one by another, vampire and.. werewolf. Everything ended after few moments. Sweet memory of that night was unforgetable for many years. Strange mystic glowing of surroundings rocks and moonlight from above gave supernatural charm to that moment, which become eternity for You two. Next evening you wake up with strange feeling - new life was born inside Your body. Day by day the impossible was becoming more and more visible - You were pregnant. By next six days Your companion was feeding You with blood of his prey. When the week passed by a child was born - nothing before was so painful... and made u feel so happy. Azel - it was the name of Your companion - brought a small bundle. You then recognize child of wolves and Your child, with two vampire fangs. Then cruel thought sneak into Your head: You wonn't be able bring up this child, You wonn't be able witness its growth. "Take it him your tribe", You asked Azel. Your eyes filled with bloody tears. Next evening You wake up alone with short letter put under small stone next.. many years later You found out that. far away in the North werewolf chosen by destiny manged to unite local tribes and they made the enclave for everyone who refused to stay in the City. Threads of fate are very strange.
Nie wiem tylko jak rozumieć to ostatnie "Zdobyłaś .....IMIĘ MĘSKIE".
Prosze o sprawdzenie pod kątem gramatyki, ortografi i stylistyki, wszytkich, którzy czują sie an siłach.
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Ten post był edytowany 2 raz(y), ostatnio edytowany przez nedian: 12-11-2006 23:41.
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PsychoFish
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Love, lust, fascination - you just don't know what it really was. One thing you were sure about it was that when you saw him running away from mutant herd, you were immediately sure you are ready to risk everything, even your undead life, to save him. You made your blood run faster in your veins, muscles tensed up and tendons went more elastic. You've jumped. Herd leader's head came off his corpse strangely easy, semi sweet, semi sticky odour of blood filled your nose with bloodlust. You've fought quickly and efficiently, arm to arm, vampire and... werewolf. After several moments it was all over. Taste of this night sculptured a memory to be never forgotten. Strange, mystical aura over rocks in the surroundings and light shed by full moon gave supernatural charm to this moment, which for you two lasted an eternity. Next evening you woke up with strange feeling - a feeling of a new life inside you. Over next six days your companion brought freshly hunted animals, so you could feed on them by drinking still warm blood. Seventh day was a birth day, nothing what you felt in your entire existence never caused such a pain... and such a joy! Azel - as werewolf was named - passed you a small bundle. You saw inside a wolf child with two vampire fangs. You understood, that you will not be granted the time to see the child growing up.- Take it to your folk - you've said, and your eyes filled with bloody tears. On the next evening you woke up alone, with small gift and a note aside. Many years later you've learned that on far north a werewolf scarred by cruel destiny united all surrounding clans and created an asylum for all those, who refused to live in the City. Mysterious are the paths of fate...
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I teraz - jak przedmiociki:
You've gained:
Jak synek:
You have a son:
MALE NAME
poprawka na "rocks in the surroundings"
"scarred by destiny" na "scarred by cruel destiny" - przeznaczenie wyrzyna niezle blizny swoimi naznaczeniami 
Wiec winno byc okrutne; )
edit: usuniecie formatowanai znakow specjalnych z UTF - word dal czadu 
edit2: interpunkcja i birth day zamiast birthday
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Ten post był edytowany 3 raz(y), ostatnio edytowany przez PsychoFish: 13-11-2006 16:59.
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Szeszej
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Was it love? Or bodily desire? Or maybe fascination? Yet, one thing is certain - as soon as you spotted him fleeing from a pack of mutants, you knew that you would risk every single thing, even your so-called life, to save him. You made blood in your veins flow faster, your muscles grew, your sinews became more resilient and leaped! Feeling of pity ran through your body as leader of the pack was so easily decapitated. Scent of blood filled your mind with lust for more. Fight was extremely fast and effective. Arm in arm, shoulder to shoulder - vampire and... werewolf. In no time the struggle ended. You would forever harbour in memory the sweet taste of that night. Strange, magical glow of ruins around you and light of the full-moon shaped that moment in a miraculous way. For you that instant lasted forever. When you woke up next evening, you became aware of odd sensation of new life inside your womb. For hte next six days your friend was bringing you dead animals so that you could consume their blood. Day after day the impossible was getting more and more apparent - you begot an offspring. On the seventh day birth took place, you have never before experienced anything that painful ... and joyful as well. Azel - that was how your companion was called - handed you a little bundle. You recognised a wolf-child, your child, with two vampiric canines. It was the time you understood how much you wished you would see your descendant growing up. But you knew that was unfulfillable wish. 'Take him to your people' you said as your eyes once ruthless and cruel, that time were filled with bloody tears. You awoke at dusk the following day. Nothing remained of your friend, but a short letter pressed with a gift to your chest. Many years passed before you learned that in far north a wolfman marked by destiny united local clans and created a haven for all those, who wanted to live outside of the City. Veiled with uncertainty are the paths of fate. You received .....MALE NAME
Niech tak będzie
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Zły Notatnik pięknie zawinął mi wiersze
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EDIT2:
Trochę spellingu i vocabulary. Następnym razem proszę trochę wcześniej umieszczać takie rzeczy - nawet dla studenta nie jest to najlepsza pora
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JerryW
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Are you sure we should put our translations here? This way the people that tries to do it later can use the vocabulary of the ones that tried it before...
If it is not forbidden I will send my version to SushiMaker as a private message.
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oczywiscie, że można na PW wysyłać
tutaj teksty poddawane są niejako wspólnej ocenie
a później i tak bedzie widać kto jak tłumaczy
ja widzę na razie trzy osoby (tylko jedna wkleiła tutaj propozycję), które mogły by dobrze przetłumaczyć ten tekst, decyzja (która nie jest prosta) będzie należała do Sushiego
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Navka1
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Love, desire, fascination, what do myself you not know this was. One you are certain, when you saw uciekającego Him you knew, that you would venture all in front of herd of mutants, even one's no - to save life to Him. You caused, that blood quickly zakrążyła in Your veins, mięśnie swelled, and tendons made more elastic - you Jumped - Head of leader of herd detached from body with odd lightness, słodko - sticky scent of blood filled Twe of nostril desire of killing. You fought quickly and effectively, shoulder at shoulder, vampire and... Werewolf. In some chwil it was already after all. Taste of this night on many next years he engraved himself You in memory. Odd mystical faint light of neighbouring stones as well as thrown light through moon in full moon broadcasted supernatural she pulled herself charm of moment, which for you into eternity. You woke up next evening you felt new life in itself with odd feeling. By next six days Your accompany he brought You byś shooted animals she could feed them blood. With every day this impossible what stood up more and more more visible - you carried new life in itself . Seventh's day he followed childbirth, anything what hitherto you survived it did not cause You of such pain.. And it did not fill up such joy. Azel - because so he had onto name your accompany he passed This small bundle. You saw wolf child Your child in him, from two wampirzymi fangs. You understood then that no datas it will You see how Your child grows. - Take it to one's - you said and eyes of ruthless hunter filled bloody tears. Next evening you woke up already myself pressed present with short note . Many you inquired years later that further on midnight marked werewolf destination he united neighbouring clans and they created enclave together for this everybody, which did not want to live in City. Odd judgements of destination are. You won ..... BOY NAME
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Xwks
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Love, desire, fascination, oneself you do not know what this {then} was. One you are certain, when you saw Him uciekającego before herd of mutants you knew, that you would venture all, even one's own nie-życie to rescue {to save} Him. You caused, that blood more quickly zakrążyła in Your veins, brawn one swelled, and tendons turned out more elastic - You jumped - Head of leader of pack came off from bodies {corpse} with strange lightness, słodko-lepki scent of blood filled Your nostrils with wish of killing. You fought quickly and efficiently, shoulder at shoulder, vampire and... werewolf. In several of moments was already after all. Taste this of night on many following years gullied You {these} oneself in memories. Strange mystical faint light {of} neighbouring stones and light thrown by {through} moon fully granted {posted} supernatural charm of moment, which for lasted {passed} you in eternity. of Next evening you woke up with strange feeling you felt in Oneself new life. By {through} following six days Your comrade brought You {these} shot animals you would be able to have some food their {them} with blood. With every day this {then} what impossible became more and more visible - you bore {you wore} in oneself new life. of Seventh day!!!!!ed childbirth, nothing what up to here {hitherto} you lived {you survived} did not cause You {these} of such pain.. and did not fill with such joy. Azel - because yes {so} had on name your comrade gave You {these} not large parcel. You saw in him {it} wolf's child Your child, with two wampirzymi fangs. You understood then that not given will be You {these} to see how {as} Your child grows. - Begin it {them} to one's own - you said and eyes ruthless {absolute} hunters did with bloody tears. of Next evening you woke up already oneself with short note pressed with present. Many of years later you found out that far on midnight {north} werewolf marked with destination {fate} united neighbouring clans and together created enclave for these all, whiches did not want to live in City. Strange are judgements of destination {fate}. You conquered..... BOY MAN'S
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Ten post był edytowany 1 raz(y), ostatnio edytowany przez Xwks: 23-11-2006 09:47.
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